Can you find what’s common between these two print ads?
Both advertisements seem to use a similar formula to bring out the benefits of their product/service. They juxtapose a before and after picture – while positioning their product as the bridge for getting from before to after.
In the first ad, bad eyesight is depicted by the blurred vision of the painting. Next, Van Gogh’s face is seen clearly through a lens, which portrays the benefits of using corrective lenses.
The second ad from WeightWatchers depicts the hardships of being overweight by using a wide entrance door – something which every obese person can relate to. On the other hand, the narrow exit door represents the positive outcomes of losing weight. And, the “Weight Watchers” logo is placed perfectly in between to emphasize key to the transformation from before to after.
It is not just these two ads, but Madison Avenue churns out hundreds of such ads year after year. The common thread is that they are modeled along a popular copywriting technique – the Before-After-Bridge or the BAB technique.
A Pro Guide on How to Write a Cold Email in 2023
What is ‘Before-After-Bridge’ Copywriting Technique?
Before-After-Bridge (or) BAB, is a copywriting technique that revolves around the basic idea of getting someone from a bad place to a better place with your help. It is designed to make your product/service appeal to the wants and needs of your reader and compel them to take the necessary action. BAB helps you portray the advantages and benefits of your product, which helps you write benefit-focused copies.
As the name suggests, it has three parts:
Part 1: Before – The Bleak Picture:
First, you start off by telling the reader how relevant pain points are affecting their current situation. Paint a bleak picture of their current world so that the reader can realize the problems that they are facing.
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Part 2: After – The Promised Land:
Next, tell them how their world would be if these problems didn’t exist – The Promised Land. You need to help them see the difference between the two worlds, explain to them what benefits they will be reaping from this world.
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Part 3: Bridge – The Yellow Brick Road:
At the end, provide them with a path; a solution to help the reader move from Before to After. A bridge between two worlds or you could even say, a path to a better place, like The Yellow Brick Road. Your product/service acts as the Bridge that will guide them.
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How to Write Cold Emails using The BAB Technique:
Here’s how you can implement the BAB framework into your cold emails:
Begin by explaining to them their current world and how the pain points/problems are affecting them. Your goal here should be to remind them of the pain they are going through and get them to acknowledge that it is quite real.
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You can also go about asking a relevant question on a pain point that they might be facing. By asking a question you’re getting the prospect to imagine how bad the situation is if that pain point/problem exists. This fear acts as a motivator, increasing your chances of a response.
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Here, go about telling them about a prosperous future where these pain points/problems don’t exist – provide them with a happy picture. The After section is designed to create a desire.
While describing how the world would be different if these problems didn’t exist, you should also mention the benefits the prospect will reap from that world.
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Finally, after you have described the Before and After scenario to your prospect, provide the bridge between the two worlds. Your product/service will be the Bridge that your prospect uses to alleviate their problems. Explain how your product/service can help them overcome their problems.
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To strengthen your Bridge statement, you can state facts and proofs. People have more faith if you can back up your statements and promises with facts and acquired proofs. Your Bridge can sometimes be combined with your Call To Action (CTA) statement to get a more crisp and clear ending to your cold email.
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Here is a cold email example that uses the BAB framework:
Why does BAB Technique work for Cold Emails?
The BAB technique helps avoid the most common pitfall of most sales email messaging. Features vs Benefits. Instead of talking about the features that you offer, BAB helps you to remain focused on the benefits.
For eg: Instead of writing about a “CRM that syncs with your email”, the messaging of the cold email can remain focus on “a CRM that saves sales reps hours of manual labor” – classic features vs benefits approach.
Additionally, the BAB technique puts the prospect front and center and makes her the Hero of the narrative. Rather than talk about yourself and your product and how you can help, the BAB technique flips the script and stays focused on the prospect, her current world/ pain and how this world can be transformed for the better.
This dual impact of, focusing on benefits and grounding the messaging in prospect’s world makes this a killer advertising technique to write the perfect cold email.
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